For the driven coach and course creator looking to turn more web visitors into buyers. . .

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✨ The Sparkle & Shine ✨

Sales Page Audit

Transform your sales page from lukewarm to lucrative
(with my 7-step conversion-focused framework)

“How Can My Sales Page Perform Better?”

Maybe in launching your course, you had to throw together a sales page quickly. And missed a few essential sections.

Perhaps you used a template to help you with structure. But it doesn’t resonate with your audience or do your course justice.

Maybe you tried ChatGPT to shortcut the process. But your page sounds generic, no matter how many prompts you try.

“I’M worried I’m leaving money on the table”

You’ve poured your heart and soul into creating an online course but can’t get people to sign up through your sales page.

You’re frustrated at the thought of potential students slipping away, thinking your course isn’t worth their time or money.

And budget constraints make hiring a professional copywriter seem like a distant dream.

What if there was a way to have a professional copywriter review your sales page…

…and give you suggestions on how to improve it for better conversions?

Where someone can look at your sales page and identify weaknesses, missed opportunities, and areas for improvement.

And what if this could be achieved at a fraction of the price of hiring for a full rewrite?

Imagine taking the guesswork out of what’s not working. And coming away knowing what sections are spot on and what sections need to be improved or added.

Say hello to…

✨ The Sparkle & Shine ✨
Sales Page Audit

A 7-Step audit Framework to make your sales page shine into your readers’ hearts and minds
$399 USD

Tell me more. What is it?

✨ Sparkle and Shine ✨ is a sales page audit service where I scrutinize your sales page from top to bottom using my 7-step S.P.A.R.K.L.E. signature framework.

You’ll get an optimized sales page to ignite your prospect’s desire for your course or membership.


Things I’ll look at:

S – Start with an overview of the basics.
P – Positioning. I’ll look at your unique value proposition and suggest ways to fine-tune it.
A – Analyze for gaps in messaging.
R – Review for conversion copy suggestions.
K – Keep your competitors close and find a point of difference.
L – Look for optimization opportunities using my 9-part matrix.
E – Evaluate the user experience. I’ll look at your page to see if there’s any friction caused by layout issues, site speed, and on-site SEO best practices.


You’ll get a sales page that will S.H.I.N.E.:

S – Show your prospects what’s possible with your course or membership.
H – Help them see that the transformation they want is achievable for them.
I – Ignite desire for your offer.
N – Nurture faith in you as their guide.
E – Empower them to participate and purchase.


What are the deliverables?

  1. An audit report with my recommendations. You’ll walk away with advice on how to structure and organize your sales page from the Hero section down to the Final Close.
  2. A video walkthrough of the different sections of the written report so you can quickly dive into the document.
  3. A 30-minute follow-up call within one week of the report being delivered to go through any questions you may have about your audit recommendations.
  • Note that I do not provide a complete rewrite with this audit but will offer optimization suggestions on each section of your sales page.

Who’s this for?

  • Perfect if you are a coach, consultant, or creative with an online course, membership, digital product, or a service you want to launch.
  • You have an existing sales page.

Who’s this NOT for?

  • Not for e-commerce brands or SaaS products.
  • Not for a total sales page rewrite.

Okay. So, how does this service work?

  1. Submit Your Sales Page
  • Fill out a questionnaire about your sales page so that I can gather all the information I need for your audit.
  • Note: I’ll only accept your sales page if we’re a good fit, and I can spot more than 5 conversion-boosting optimizations.
  1. I’ll analyze your sales page using my 7-step S.P.A.R.K.L.E. framework.
  • I’ll go through section by section and offer suggestions and optimizations on structure, messaging, clarity, user experience, and more.
  1. You get an audit report and video walkthrough within 7-10 business days.
  • We’ll also schedule a 30-minute follow-up call to go through any questions you may have about your audit recommendations.

Hi, I’m Sandy!


Copywriter and launch strategist helping online course creators get their course or memberships site out to their ideal audience.

I believe in non-spammy and non-salesly messaging and that a sales page should empower and educate prospects on making a purchase decision.

I’ve seen many budget-constrained course creators write their own sales pages but then struggle with it not resonating and not knowing what needs to be changed.

That’s why I created the ✨ Sparkle and Shine ✨ Sales Page Audit so that you can get recommendations and improve your conversions at a fraction of the cost of hiring for a full rewrite.

If you’re ready to boost conversions with an existing sales page, then click the button below and let’s get started.

FAQs

Yes! Reach out after the audit and we can discuss next steps.

The cost is $399 USD and includes an audit report, video walkthrough, and 30-minute follow-up call.

I sure do. I can help with your entire launch, from pre-launch strategy to post-launch activities. Reach out to schedule a discovery call – whether you need a sales page, lead magnet funnel, email sequence, launch roadmap, or more.

Yes I do! Send me an email at hello@sandy-dang.com and let’s chat.

You can send me an email at hello@sandy-dang.com, and I’ll get back to you within 2 business days.

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It’s time to SHINE a spotlight on your sales page and attract your ideal audience.

Go from second-guessing to getting the professional feedback you need to start implementing conversion boosts on your sales page.